"You unlock this door with the key of imagination. Beyond it is another dimension - a dimension of sound, a dimension of sight, a dimension of mind. You're moving into a land of both shadow and substance, of things and ideas. You've just crossed over into the Twilight Zone..."
If there is a prize within immediate reach, or a thousand kilometers away, for both story and writing that hits the beats, and ends on the right note, it has been won by this piece. There is no debating the point. From the title (how it feels after reading now!), through every feint before the blow is landed, to the lights going out on the final line. So well done, Frank.
Ooft. That got dark faster than a cloudy winter's evening in Aberdeen. Brutal, one of your finest pieces yet, sir.
Thank you, sir! Kind words.
"You unlock this door with the key of imagination. Beyond it is another dimension - a dimension of sound, a dimension of sight, a dimension of mind. You're moving into a land of both shadow and substance, of things and ideas. You've just crossed over into the Twilight Zone..."
You got it. One of my all-time favorite shows - can you tell? :)
Best comment we’ve gotten so far boys?
Best by far. Twilight Zone-esque is what I aspire to be.
Oh my god, this is horrifying and delightful and amazing. Well done!
Glad you enjoy it. Thank you!
well that was a cool story. Gotta love the corporate world! Literally dog eat dog.
Thanks Ben. This story was a cathartic release for me.
Ugh. Cyborg's got to be careful.
Never know if you'll tear someone's fingers off.
Very well done, sir.
If there is a prize within immediate reach, or a thousand kilometers away, for both story and writing that hits the beats, and ends on the right note, it has been won by this piece. There is no debating the point. From the title (how it feels after reading now!), through every feint before the blow is landed, to the lights going out on the final line. So well done, Frank.
High praise indeed. Thanks, Edward! More stories are in the works.
This is such a well-written story, and I completely enjoyed reading every single word.
Glad you enjoy it. Thanks for reading
Thank you